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Post by Dienekes on Mar 20, 2007 20:24:35 GMT -5
Dienekes [/b] Age: 23 Gender: Male Nationality: Spartan Occupation: Soldier Allegiance: to Sparta and it's citizens Physical traits:[/b] Height: 5" 12 Weight: 197 lbs. Build: Muscular Color: Tan Hair: Brown Eyes: Hazel Characteristics:[/b] Emotional[/u] Personality: Dieneke's presence can be overwhelming, he is impulsive and reckless to a fault, and his upredictability terrifies his opponents, both in contest and war. He has a strict code of honor and is extremely self-desciplined, and is more clever then anyone, save for his closest friends, would assume. Talents: Warfare, tactics, manipulations. Flaws: Politics, negotiations, obedience. Fears: Non-existent Pasttimes: Sparring, drilling, rearing horses. Aptitudes:STRENGTH: Average AGILITY: Excellent SKILL: Excellent INTUITION: Poor CUNNING: Average HEALTH: Average Weapons:[/b] History:[/b] Born and bred in Sparta, he was taken at the same time as his friends, to becomes Spartan warriors. Two years afterward, during a particularly severe flogging, Dienekes overpowered his instructor and drove a knife through his throat. Instead of being executed for his imputence, he was immediately recruited into the Spartan army by the King. He reputation quickly grew, as rumors spread of his courage, exaggerated as they most often are. He was given command of a hundred-man squadron. Family:Son: Ursus
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Post by Lyle on Mar 20, 2007 21:26:11 GMT -5
These conflict each other. Your saying he likes to gather knowledge, though he lacks in politics and negotiations, is this not the way he would gather knowledge, or do you mean something else?
Your 'stats' are far too high, more or less for a Spartan. Intuition seems too high, and you may see it better to lower another stat.
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Post by Dienekes on Mar 21, 2007 5:26:58 GMT -5
Alright, I modified the places you pointed out. I'm going to add to it over the days, just was short of time yesterday. Thanks for the advice.
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Post by Iolanthe on Mar 21, 2007 11:22:06 GMT -5
XD Feel free to work on it as you see fit, but approved
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Post by King Leonidas I on Mar 21, 2007 22:54:02 GMT -5
errg, the Spartan soildiers all have sons. It is the only way they were able to fight with the main force. maybe a new character could have no children but the canon characters all had sons.
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Post by Iolanthe on Mar 21, 2007 22:55:34 GMT -5
errg, the Spartan soildiers all have sons. It is the only way they were able to fight with the main force. maybe a new character could have no children but the canon characters all had sons. My God, I can't believe I missed that. Yes, please edit that part! *shamefaced, skulks off to the corner* Thank you, Leonidas
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Post by wowposter on Nov 14, 2008 11:12:42 GMT -5
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